YOU DON'T always pay attention
but see, it's just the dawn
free your mind from the pictures
which could destroy what I draw.
 
Forgotten all the best known
From standing up again in vain
the riddles become alone
so just remember a firefly from jail
 
Nothing keeps disturbing
the lonely, archaic fence
who will never find out anything
except a granular dance
 
My cup of tea sometimes
trembles into the night
real green, oh so many times
he lose his shimmering eye-sight
 
All this jumped out of a speck of dust
cowardly since hoover exists
and they all know that traveling fast
in a torch has an enchant resist.
 
In a misty purple evening
you should take this stroll
to catch a glimpse of this feeling
even if I do not call
 
it the song of little meanings...
You could see me, but you aren't
sorry for giving secret caches
you should forget them AT ALL!

 

by Orsolya Lukács  (Herman Otto Gimnázium, Miskolc)

 

Comments by the judges:

So many of the entries are rather traditional love poems with sing-song masculine rhymes. “The Song of Tiny Nothing” departs wonderfully from the rest of the lot by exploring an abstraction or idea. Its rhymes are often fresh and interesting: draw/dawn, known/vain/alone, fence/dance, all the ‘t’ sounds in stanza 5, stroll/call, etc. The poem also has a delightful sense of irony and humor, which so few of the other entries – in all their seriousness and romance – seldom displayed. Near the end, the writer almost mocks his or her own lyricism: “even if I do not call / it the song of little meanings.”

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